Hi everyone I am at home with a very sickly vomiting boy...I hope I manage not to get sick too! Please remember to...work on your ASPIRE... have you got....
*Back ground research
*Progress report - how is your life different by making the change?
*Photographs to provide evidence of your change taking place *The introduction to your persuasive argument that highlights why the change needed to take place
Keep blogging! I miss you all!
Ms D
Well hope Tom feels better soon and looks like I still won't be there tomorrow man colds are annoying!!!! :( anyway hope to c u wednesday
ReplyDeleteHi Mia, I hope you are feeling better soon too! and you are a good patient for your mum to look after! I'm sure you will be!
ReplyDeleteNo futsal for you tomorrow then (or me!)...maybe get Mum to ring the school and let Mrs Cleland know that you are sick :-(
Hope you feel better soon!
Ms D
Ok mum will call The school tomorrow and we Will somehow have to sort out Amara I will call her in the morning have a good evening and hope Tom is not puking all night long! :(
ReplyDeleteHey ms downie how's Tom? I was just wondering how we wil write our introduction for the aspire like do u need to go throughout it with us First or do we just do what we did for the science fair
ReplyDeleteMia :)
hey mia and ms D,
ReplyDeleteim sorry but i didn't manage to get to mia's house on monday to give her the notices,
so i'll try to fit it in to my busy schedule Ha,Ha.
p.s we did our mirimba-ukelele sharing today and it went really well.
p.p.s hope to see u back at school on thursday
fingers crossed.
Hi guys. thanks for your comments...Thom is a poorly chap....still lots of vomiting...yuck...but he ate a pikelet for dinner (he normally eats loads!!!!) and it stayed down...(so far...)...but I am definitely not in tomorrow (Wednesday) but I will be back on Thursday.
ReplyDeleteMia...your introduction, all it needs to be is: what was the change, why did you want to make the change, what are some of the things you tried to change (you are just going to briefly mention these and go into more detail in the later part of your argument) you need to state why other people should make the change and what you thought about the change...
let me know if that doesn't make sense!
See you soon
Ms D
Ok thanks that makes perfect sense :)
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